Beauty(Re)discovers the Male Body

Too long. winded! Male this, Female that.

Feedback: Matt "pex" Rogers personal essay

Overall it was a good start and it flowed well. However, I would like to have more ealaboration/explanation. i.e. what is "cross-checked". Also, did you get suspended? What happened? What about your first fight?

"When We Dead Awaken: Writing as Re-Vision"

I can definently hear Rich's voice and "opinions". I was still a little bothered never-the-less. I don't agree with her comment on page 546. "But to be a female human being trying to fulfill traditional female functions in a traditional way is in direct conflict with the subversive function of the imagination."Even though she stated (some what) to the contrary, I really felt that she believes that being apart from all aspects of the "evil man" and being lesbian is the only way to write and think well. HOGWASH!